Challenge 2 results & Challenge 3

Hey, everyone! You all did great on this challenge :) Here are the results:

Jazz
Spelling- A few missed words, but nothing too important
Grammar: Some missed punctuation, but otherwise great!
Storyline: Great Theme!!

Sweetred
Spelling- Not a misspelled word in sight.
Grammar: Perfect
Storyline- Awesome, but a little short.

Ninja
Storyline- Awesome
Spelling: Nothing noticable was missed
Grammar- great

Unfortunately, we have to vote someone off this round. And that person is...













































...Jazz.
Sorry to see you go, you're an awesome writer and we'll miss you. ):

Your next challenge, Sweetred and Ninja, is to write a story from the point of view of a criminal who has been in jail for 20 years and has just now been released. You decide whether he or she has seen the error of their ways, or is looking to stir up some more trouble.
Challenge 3 is due August 12th.
Good luck!
And remember, don't procrastinate ;)