Hey, everyone! You all did great on this challenge :) Here are the results:
Spelling- A few missed words, but nothing too important
Grammar: Some missed punctuation, but otherwise great!
Storyline: Great Theme!!
Spelling- Not a misspelled word in sight.
Storyline- Awesome, but a little short.
Spelling: Nothing noticable was missed
Unfortunately, we have to vote someone off this round. And that person is...
Sorry to see you go, you're an awesome writer and we'll miss you. ):
Your next challenge, Sweetred and Ninja, is to write a story from the point of view of a criminal who has been in jail for 20 years and has just now been released. You decide whether he or she has seen the error of their ways, or is looking to stir up some more trouble.
Challenge 3 is due August 12th.
And remember, don't procrastinate ;)