Hello, all! ChattyChance here. The following is [sp?] the critiques for your stories.
I apologize for the delays, as the blog was acting kinda funky.
Dott: Very good; The changes you made to the paragraph we gave were nice, even though they were small.
Chatty: Awesome! The suttle changes made went nice with the rest of the story. Great job. (:
Except for the intentional bad grammar (which we won't count as bad) Everything was great.
Chatty: Awesome. No spelling errors in sight.
Dott: Great, everything looks good.
Dott: Didn't see any problems. (:
Chatty: Awesome, everything was perfect.
Dott: The fairies idea was creative, but I feel like you were bored while telling the story.
Chatty: Creative idea, but it seems like some emotion is missing.
Both: A few commas missing.
Both: Noticed 1 mistake; the word "used" was typed as "use"
Great job to everyone! And the first official challenged will be posted shortly.